Open Poetry #1 |
Insanely Reigning Cats and Dogs and.... |
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
When she was three she said to me "I'll never move away - I'll stay with you my whole life through.. Forever and a day" But once a teen she didn't mean Those words much any more - So I, in jest, and mother's quest, Told her I'd lock the door. She said "If you don't let me do The things that others get, I'm moving back with my knapsack And plethoras of pets. Now, animals are her whole world, To Hollywood she went. The glitz and fame were not her game. In zoos her time was spent. With a degree in husbandry, She came home all grown up. But then she said, "Mom, now instead, I'm living with my pup..." She fell in lust but it went bust, And she came home to me. I saw her wend around the bend - Alas, what I did see! With baggage, and her entourage Of animals in tow, Two great big dogs, husky and dobe "Hello, Mom, we are home!" Iguanas in aquariums, Three snakes, but two were dead.. Then seven cats ~ and "Several rats For python food," she said. With all her stuff, and pets enough, Her trampoline and zoo - Just to be sure, lest Mom need more, She had Cassandra too. So that is why, as time went by My solitude sought me. She's moved out now, but not without Fulfilling prophecy. ------------------ Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done: For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits, Than I am sure I have in my whole five. ~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75 [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-19-99).] |
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Haskins Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 85Dallas, TX |
Splendid rhythm...and a sense of humor that would make any child lucky to call you mom. ------------------ William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So now she's gone Your life goes on Without the family zoo. It must be lonely Because the only Animal left is YOU! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Reptiles are my greatest passion. It serves no purpose to comment on your consistently perfect structure and rhyme, so I will content myself with content. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Nan, What can I say about perfection? You and Balladeer moter my illusions and are the unction of my functions. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
You still amaze me... ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
All I can say is WOW! |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
I just love it! |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Thanks Nan, I just had a good laugh at that. Of course the rhyme and rhythm are excellent as usual. Good job *8) |
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