Open Poetry #1 |
Feelings |
Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Don't shun me if I have a brain You wouldn't like it done to you Loneliness can cause such pain A genius has feelings too Don't laugh at me if I'm not bright You wouldn't laugh if it were you Cruel laughter's just not right An idiot has feelings too Don't point at me if I am lame You wouldn't point if it were you Inside this shell I'm just the same An invalid has feelings too Don't hate me if my skin's not white Inside this hide I'm just like you And if you hate me I will fight We coloured men have feelings too Be kind to all who live on earth It's not so very hard to do Give of your joy, your love, your mirth And show that you have feelings too |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely right on, Sue. If only it could be..... Terrific poem! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Words that need to be heard! Well done! ------------------ "Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain* |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Thank you - I've done better, but it was something I wanted to say. |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
This line could have been written for me 'An idiot has feelings too' Good message, great poem. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
well said, Sue !!! |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
can't argue with that! *8) |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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wordweaver Junior Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 25south carolina |
so true and yet we so ofen forget. well said. |
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