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Tonight I met a fallen angel...
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Tonight I met a fallen angel... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Tonight I met a fallen angel Who came to me from up above Who would have thought that in a stranger Someone like me could find love Her voice was friendly and unique Her eyes were glittering with sparks She used my silent thoughts to speak And always laughed at my remarks She promised that she wouldn’t wake me If I was dreaming all of this She swore to me that she would take me Beyond the boundaries of a kiss My eyes were swimming in her soul I realized that I’ve been blessed The clock was ticking on the wall My heart was tacking in my chest My heart could not believe my sight I walked her home and held her hand And in response to my “good-night” She said, “when can I see you once again?” And yet our date was never finished The clock alarm rang in her head And in a flash I was diminished And she woke up tucked in her bed ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
A very beautiful piece here - although I'm a bit confused....are you the one in bed dreaming, or is she ? Is she the angel, or are you? Hhmmm? I read it over a few times, but I'm still lost - help me! It's late, and I'm pobably just half asleep....  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
Welcome to the forums M...  (your complete nickname is reserved for someone special in my live  )[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-18-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I thought this was quite good, but I too am confused. She wouldn't wake you,(so it's your dream). Then she wakes up tucked in her bed? (Her dream?) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
"Two dreamers met in dreams"--thanks for your comments. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I got it! She was dreaming that a man was dreaming of her! Good one! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
There you go, you go it. I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad to be here. ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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