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Last night I dreamt in color...
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Last night I dreamt in color... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Last night I dreamt in color Of dark gray sky with scars Left by the fallen stars Which landed in my hand And turned into a flower And blossomed on my land Her petals moist with dew I could not help but stare Her fragrance filled the air The flower reached for light She looked so real and true Her beauty seized my sight I could not turn my head I could not get enough I knew I was in love I sat there on my porch And she was all I had The flower let me watch The flower let me touch The flower let me tame I gave her a new name And I would call her Rose She liked the name so much For me she’d strike a pose She loved to be admired It gave her purpose to exist She’d dress up in the mist It kept her warm like fur And all that I desired Was to remain with her Last night I dreamt in color I woke up from the sun My Rose was long time gone Although I held her tight My love could not restrain a flower What dreams may come tonight! ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I think this is a beautiful piece, and it brought a smile. Nice work and welcome to the forums.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like your poem.....and your signature too....  |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I'm glad you liked it. I wrote this poem when I was only 13, but it still is one of my favorites. ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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