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Star upon the Horizon |
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DarkChiild Junior Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 18 |
A Star upon the Horizon ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A lack of understanding confusion clouds the mind the voice of reason resounding yet gears of guilt do grind The shackles have been broken yet something ties her down the familiar, the unseen force her comfort did keep her bound But who was I to say that reason was the key yet to this very day I hope she'll one day see The flame that burns so bright to her is just a star that could emit such vivid light if only she weren't so far So for now I sit in darkness and hope she'll some day see that the star upon the horizon always was and will be me. ------------------ Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first. --DarkChiild-- |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, very beautiful. I'm impressed..  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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DarkChiild Junior Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 18 |
Thanx alot Alwye! That means alot coming from you. I love everything I've read by u so far. ------------------ Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first. --DarkChiild-- |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it.... |
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