Alone is where the pain is at

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Open Poetry #1

Alone is where the pain is at

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-17 02:26 PM

use me take me,
bend me, break me,
dont apologize,
just realize,
sweep me under the rug,
wipe up my blood,
play your innocence,
till the final act,
cancer to the face,
of everything disgraced,
my ends have seen the gory,
of a thousand worlds collapse,
now bring me hell,
and dont come back,
alone is where my pain is at

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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-08-17 08:40 PM

I liked this one, but when I read it, I seemed to read it fast..there was a tempo that seemed off...perhaps reformatting would slow it down? I don't know...but I liked it.

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

2 posted 1999-08-17 09:39 PM

I like the rap.

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