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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Strong...It is the first words that comes to mind when I think of them. Beautiful and strong... Much like yourself you know? Maybe you don't...but when I think of you I think of them. Perfectly graceful... Producing the beauty of your mind. Staegically you create... I've studied the way you do so. You may not see me, but I do. With much wonder I observe you as they constantly move... unconscience of your rythm... caressing everything you touch... undressing all that you encounter. Your passion is ignited... cause your hands you see... are your soul communicating all over me. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Great perspective! I'll never look at my keyboard the same way.  |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
After your feedback I will never look at my keyboard the same either. Thank you Andrew for your kind words I am new at this and it means a lot! blueloon |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
My Gawd ! After reading this I had to get intimate with my keyboard too - AND had to take a cold shower!! If this were any more erotic, I'm afraid my hard drive would have started smoking...! LOL This definately deserves to go back to the top!! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I'm sorry blueloon, but this piece of yours absolutely fascinates me, I can't believe you didn't get more response!! I insist it goes back to the top, all the way from page 28 or so! ~~dusting it off carefully~~ ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
I loved this poem! Great work blueloon, thanks for sharing it. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Love it! |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Thank you Poet for being so kind. I appreciate all your kind words at any time. I wish I could have replied sooner but I was out of town. Thanks again to 'child and Sue. Blueloon |
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