Open Poetry #1 |
Plain Elvira? |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
As a youngster, I looked for a figure, With a rearend so fine, and a chest much bigger. A face like an angel, a waist like a thimble, Looks were important, it all seemed so simple. But age makes one change, Looks are deceiving, It's not the beauty outside, But the thoughts worth receiving. They say that beauty's, In the eye of the beholder, And what's beautiful to me, Has changed since I've grown older. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
That's not age, Toerag, it's maturity. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Whatever the cause, I'm grateful! LOL. Wonderful poem, sweets.... your thoughts are always worth receiving! *G* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
That was sweet! I have to agree with Sue there, I think it is maturity. And that doesn't always come with age. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
so all that's left for me are bald lewd toothless lascivious one-legged viagra-needing ex-wife-having hard-of-hearing discount-pharmacy child-support-paying reading-glasses-wearing talking-about-the-good-ol'-days men then?...***sniffles*** ***praying**** couldn't help myself Toerag |
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Carolina Girl Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 63 |
ROFLMAO@Elvira! Toe, your poem is so truthful. You're on a roll today!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Look at it this way, Elvira - If they're all of those things, they're probably at least loyal and faithful as well!!... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Toe, I loved your poem. It makes me so glad to think there is one man out there that isn't dashing off, gold chains around his neck in his fancy red sports car honking at the 20 year old blond jogging on the side of the road! (was that a long sentence or what?) |
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