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DarkChiild
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since 1999-08-09
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0 posted 1999-08-16 12:43 PM



A life of strangled anguish
grim decadence unfold
led by the blackened heart
just do what you are told
A Gift, a grain of sugar
taste the sweetness of my decay
then salt the open wound
when I take the taste away
Beg and plead my friend
the addiction bleeds you dry
I'll be your friend of misery
until the day you die
So taste my sweet addiction
praise the atrophede dove
hold to your convictions
for the addiction you call love.

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Wish in one hand, then shit in the other and see which one fills up first.


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Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
1 posted 1999-08-16 02:39 AM


Wonderful, wonderful poem.
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-08-16 10:28 AM


I like this one! Welcome to the family! I look forward to more.


Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
3 posted 1999-08-16 06:43 PM


Very good poem.Happy writing.
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 1999-08-16 09:32 PM


...Very nice, indeed....
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