Open Poetry #1 |
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Old Man Rocking |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow ![]() |
Old Man Rocking Galloping on horseback through the woods. Sinking house with shattered windows. Old man rocking on metal chair. Waves, as off into the distance you ride. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
A very lonely poem - I liked it. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sue: Thanks ![]() |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
this poem has that certain something i can't quite put my finger on, considering i usually prefer rhyme, that means it must be extremely well done...hope you didn't fall asleep in that metal rocking chair? ![]() |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Elvira: Thank-You for your response, it means a lot since this style is not your favorite. I was thinking of a lonely old man living alone in the wilderness, and how often it seems no one would notice, as he wished they would. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LD: I like your poem. It reminded me very much of one I wrote a long time ago called "Everyone Knows Her"... I think I'll post it! *G* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah - I think I see him...... ![]() ![]() |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Suthern: Thank-You for your response, I shall read yours also. Nan: Your images are excellent. |
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