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Missed_fantasy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 16
Mankato, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-08-16 02:51 PM


Our love was like a shadow
always there in light or dark
It followed us in life
like a question and a mark
We swore our love was endless
with passion and with care
And promised to each other
words we never meant to bare
Our love was like a seagull
flying fast above the beach
Soaring through the clouds
up out of sight and out of reach
Through rain and winds it grew
with every rising of the sun
From whence it sprung a mystery
the fickle fates three spun
Our love will last forever
in the day and in the night
We will clasp it tight around us
should it cost us all our might


To Dustin
5 month anniversary 08/11/99 17:07

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Love always and blessed be my children

© Copyright 1999 Missed_fantasy - All Rights Reserved
poohbear
Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 42
piedmont,sc
1 posted 1999-08-16 03:10 PM


very nice this obviously comes from the heart. happy aniversary
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-16 03:12 PM


Well versed! Happy anniversary!
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-08-16 08:55 PM


Welcome to the forums, Miss...
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 1999-08-16 09:37 PM


Very nicely said....
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