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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-08-13 04:12 AM

I know I shall never have you, love.
The Fates may not allow it to be so.
Yet, I shall keep on searching up above
for something more than what it is I know.

It seems that I may never kiss your eyes.
I might not have the chance to see your smile.
Though, we can fool ourselves with lovely lies,
I cannot say we'll go that extra mile.

Alas, we find each other's kiss in dreams.
Such torture when we wake to find them gone.
And love may never be just what it seems.
Yet, somehow, love, for us, goes on and on.

In dreams I touch my lips to yours, my dear.
'Tis only in my dreams I feel you near.

©1999 Erin Solari

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 08-13-99).]

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-08-13 01:42 PM

Did I write this sonnet correctly?

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-08-13 03:53 PM

I would say that you wrote it very well. It expresses your thoughts and feelings clearly.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-08-13 04:02 PM

You did excellently, one voice. You are growing by leaps and bounds.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

4 posted 1999-08-13 05:24 PM

Thank you Dream! Thank you Balladeer! To receive such praise from the both of you is such a warm fuzzy!

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 1999-08-13 05:30 PM

Dreams: A world where all is possible and where reality eventually takes root.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

6 posted 1999-08-13 06:41 PM

I surely hope so, Mr. Scott. Thank you.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-08-13 09:57 PM

this has a beautiful melancholy feel about it, one voice. I love it..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

pen of passion
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since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

8 posted 1999-08-13 11:39 PM

So romantically well-written.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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9 posted 2004-04-20 04:12 AM

beautiful but sort of sad too

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