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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
The wind blows a little slower The voices talk a little lower The face a little longer The silence a little stronger The heart a little swallowed The morning a little hollowed The sound is followed To the fresh and empty grave. to: Uncle Randy [This message has been edited by Rhiannon (edited 08-11-99).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very powerful & descriptive to a T....absolutely sets the mood like the reader is there...very good use of words to evoke feelings...and your senses... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Evocative, recognisable, well written. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
A few years ago, my little sister's best friend was hit by a car and killed. She was only eight years old. This really reminded me of her funeral. Very well written. ------------------ One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Thank you very much for your kind words. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read in usual speed, thought provoking; read slowly, and it is heart wrenching. Very good work. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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