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Fair Warning! |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US 
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Our family includes the young as families so often do, as well as those who aren't so young, but take our mirth with moral view. And neither young nor those so strung should cringe each time they click anew, to find our home just too risqué - and quickly click themselves away. I like to laugh like hardy har, and like to think I'm not a prude, but Passion's not a single's bar where jokes are coarse and words are lewd. So if your verse goes just too far, and if your words can be construed suggestively and too risqué - post in Adult or go away! I hope everyone will take this message as fair warning. This is our home, guys! You wouldn't allow your dog to soil the carpet in the living room, nor would you pile last night's trash in the middle of the sofa. And I won't tolerate Passions becoming a dumping ground for sexual innuendo and tasteless near-obscenity. Either clean it up, post it in the Adult Forum, or take it to someone else's home. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you Ron.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
'NUFF SAID! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Gawd.....I hope I'm not one of the guilty ones...I know I get naughty at times, and I forget which room I'm in - flipping back & forth...please forgive me if I step over the line at any time...and correct me on the spot so I don't make a boob of myself ! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Thank you for getting the point across. [This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 08-12-99).] |
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Clmbb Junior Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 18Petersburg,Pa, USA |
I'm glad someone said it. Was not sure where we were to post what anymore. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I agree!!! Thank you, Ron! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thanks Ron!!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Thank you for your support, my friends. I had a funny feeling there would be others who felt the same. (And if not, it was destined to get darn lonely in here! )Really - it's nice to hear I'm not just being a prudish ogre... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I suggest the threads be closed on offending poetry to prevent further replies.... [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-12-99).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let us go on and have our fun. Keep writing entertaining poems - We'll laugh at each's quips and puns. But, if YOUR poem makes YOU quest Which Passions Forum should be host??? No doubt it should be with the rest Of deVine's feisty "Adult" posts!!!  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-12-99).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ron, your point is well taken...and thanks for getting it out sooner than later; however, with regard to dogs soiling and trash in the middle of the room...I'm not too sure about ******, but I believe he will get the hint. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by rcarnell (edited 08-12-99).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If anyone has the slightest doubt about where to post their poem (if they think it might not be suitable for the open forum), please post it in the Adult Forum and if it's not bad, we'll direct you to the Open Forum. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
wise words |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I agree Ron You should see how many people got upset about a little boy saving kittens from the river in my Little Boy Voices poem. I never dreamed there were so many people in here who didn't love kittens as much as me. Incidently, if I do stray over the line, please delete to your heart's content. I will not take offense. I have more words to write that are suitable - the loss of a poem will not hurt me as much as the loss of a friend. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well said Ron, it's nice to see someone take a positive, instead of angry stand! ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah! glad I didn't miss this one! maybe this should be reposted again and again! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I agree, Dix... this one is great. A good reminder for everyone. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maybe it is time for a repost, Ron? |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
Nice warning...yes, yes! A re-post is needed! What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about? |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I believe you will find my work to be a bit heavy but never lewd or rude. sinse I do not own a computer of my own, you will also hear from me quite spuraticly. Also please forgive spelling errors. Feel free to e mail me at rrobichauxjr@yahoo.com please. Being a rookie member I may need a little guidance thanks , adagio |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maybe time for this reminder, so I am giving you a friendly bump because "I can!" |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. A strong voice in a not long poem yes, home, home, home. so very good a poem to read. and this is your true spirit. love this one. |
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