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The choice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The choice Here I lie in a dreamer's wake, But half asleep and half awake, Struggling with the seen and unseen, The silent nod and inbetween. Lord knows I need the silent nod, The dream is but some goldenrod And if I let it filter through, It surely will my sleep undo. If I could, I would the two, But this I know I cannot do, I can pursue but only one And with this, the other undone. Sometimes a choice for you is made, Without your help or conscious aid, And here the choice for me was done But can you guess which choice had won? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Nice rhyming. I would say the sleep overcame. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy, You're just getting too darned good, ya know???  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhtDove and Nan Thank you so much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
philosophical you |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thought I would take a wee skip into memory lane. I figure the sleep won? Carpe' Diem |
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