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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
You and I can surely see The pain within each other's pleas. We all write down our thoughts inside But can we say what's on our minds? I'd rather have the other side And plainly speak instead of hide. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Short, but good. I liked it! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Not one wasted word.................very well written!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
An arrow to the bull, hit in one. Well done! |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
God do I know that feeling. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thanks! |
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