Open Poetry #1 |
Suicide |
Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Please think before you do, please give yourself a chance. Life isn't really that bad, you've only seen it at a glance. Please give us a chance, and you very well may see, that life really is fun, really fun to be! So think again, before it's too late, Sucide is horrible, dying can wait. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Dying seems to be the only escape for some, sad, but a harsh reality. I grieve for those that do take their own life, but I rejoice that the pain that drove them there is at an end. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Thanx! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Depression almost deprived me of the greatest joy I've ever known... good poem! |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Thanks! |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Suicide has played a big part in my life. I am starting to overcome it, though. ------------------ One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Very good work, Sundance! Although, I can only hope that those that feel that pain...that want to end their life... I hope that they can realize that it is the way they are feeling that they want to end, and not really their life, right? ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Very right you are! Thanks for responding u guys! |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
In this sad worlds of ours,sorrow comes to all and it often comes with bitter agony. Perfect relief is not possible,except with time.You cannot now believe that you will ever feel better.But this is not true.You are sure to be happy again.Knowing this truly believing this will make you less miserable now.I have had enough experience to make this statment. Abraham Lincoln |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
I love abarham lincoln! Thanks for responding! |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
I was taught that suicide was for cowards, it's the ones left behind who really suffer. And in doing so, the person committing the suicide.. takes all his or her loved ones with him in his misery. Pretty selfish act, I think. but just my humble opinion. |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
The reason I wrote this poem, is because my friend tried to commit suicide, but failed,(thank god). I totally agree on the selfish act thing! |
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