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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
i know the time will come, when i get a chance to light up your world... when you get a chance, to change mine... quite bluntly... i need you to feed my mind, to enlighten my soul... giving meaning to life, and all that i know... i need your eyes... on me, in me, penetrating... through me, the core of your soul surrounding me, while it comforts me and holds me... reaching the truth of my essence, and far beyond the boundaries of my presence... so in response to all your questions, your fears, your doubts, your needs... as long as you can love me too, my love will fulfill your dreams... |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Very nice poem.I enjoyed it. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thank you Delores... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
AC, enjoyed the read, the best of luck. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thanks... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
After the third read, I began to see the depth of this poem. If we could only find someone to take the time to look inside..... I like the sincerity of this poem very much. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Balladeer...i'm much flattered...thank you so much...it's really just a plea to have him really look at me...afterall, it's so hard to let just anyone see... [This message has been edited by ac (edited 08-11-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ac....this poem was well written, there is a flow to it that makes the poem work well. It says a lot and almost taunts the reader to grasp it's meaning. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thanks much hoot_owl_rn i'm glad you enjoyed, your comment is very much appreciated... |
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