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Open Poetry #1

I Know I Can't Have You

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

0 posted 1999-08-11 01:44 AM

I fear I am falling
I fear of my love for you
I fear I need you in me
I fear you complete me

Give me one moment
To hold you so close
Give me forever
I'm losing control

I'm burning inside
With this feeling oh God
Help me from taking
This disasterous plunge

I'm shaking with pleasure
I'm aching with need
I'm pleading for solace
I'm dying to flee

From your embrace
It's you that I fear
I need to remember
That your nowhere near

But I hear your voice
I listen and I fall
I think of a future
But only a wall

It's you that I want
It's you in my dreams
It's you that I see
Together with me

But all is such pain
To know it's not you
To know never at all
I will hold you in my arms

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

1 posted 1999-08-11 05:59 AM

I know where you are coming from. I'm feeling that same pain right now, and it hurts like Hell.

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

2 posted 1999-08-11 06:01 AM

I know where you are coming from. I'm feeling that same pain right now, and it hurts like Hell.

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

3 posted 1999-08-11 09:27 AM

I wrote this partly from past experience partly from fiction, but that feeling can be the worst ever...knowing youu can't have the one person you really want. Thank you for your feedback Angel Girl!!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-08-11 08:19 PM

This poem makes a strong impact on the reader

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

5 posted 1999-08-11 09:45 PM

Great thats what i wanted to do...this is a strong emotion...thanks Hoot for your comment!!!

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

6 posted 1999-08-12 05:45 AM

Anytime.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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