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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-08-10 04:37 PM


Rainbows are ribbons
Of light fantastic
Tied to the rain
Before and after
Bows in the morning
Before
Bows in the evening
After

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Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-08-10 04:44 PM


Short and sweet...beautiful.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

Sunshine
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2 posted 1999-08-10 05:45 PM


Love it...rainbows are ribbons! Wonderful phrase!

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© KRJ
Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


RainbowGirl
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3 posted 1999-08-10 05:59 PM


Nice one! 'Our Toe'..:-)) Ribbons of colours...and I guess you want the pleasure of undoing the many bows..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-08-10 11:18 PM


Nice poem, bows-o.
Nan
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5 posted 1999-08-11 08:44 AM


AWESOME!!



Sue
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6 posted 1999-08-11 09:28 AM


Love it.
WhtDove
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7 posted 1999-08-11 10:47 AM


Was Beautiful!
suthern
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8 posted 1999-08-12 11:25 AM


My blood was boiling in indignation, my tears were falling at the unfairnesses that life trips you with at every turn.... and then I come upon this poem... and my lips find the smile they thought they'd lost. How very beautiful!!!
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