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The World (Please comment, want to know what you 788 member think)
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The World (Please comment, want to know what you 788 member think) |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio 
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Our world is full of evil Our world is full of hate Hate released by the devil from hells binding gate Icy stares strike us Words knock us down In a world of unjust Hypocrites get the crown People speak their faith And to the lions they get thrown Danger lurks and waits; A deadly fire zone Poets speak their hearts And get pushed upon the ground They practice outlawed arts And get beat wherever they bound Friend hate Lovers cheat Kids love their parents Only to get beat Christians get crucified By followers of the Lord Cut down by their comrades; A demonic hord God weaps in heaven For His children lost So He sent his son, At the ultimate cost Our sins He took And bore of His own His father turned And left Him alone. Our world if full of evil Our world is full of hate Hate released by the devil From hells binding gate. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, here's the first response of 788 As a poem of quality...afraid it doesn't rate. |
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