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ma's day

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-08-08 11:59 PM

Mom, for Mother's Day,
I promise to obey
Whatever you say.
Unless of course
You try to force
That liver my way.

I'll pick up a broom
And clean up my room.
Or maybe a rake
Is what it'll take.

I'll mow the front yard
And even do the dishes.
As long as its not to hard
I'll follow your wishes.

Just remember, on this your day,
That soon it's back to the old way.
After the candy and flowers and work
I'll do free,
You'll get back the whining, complaining,
Lovable me.

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-09-99).]

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-08-09 12:49 PM

I loved it.I wish I could have given it too my Mom.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

2 posted 1999-08-09 01:03 AM

This is cute Walt! It reminds me of my kids... lol although even on Mother's Day, at their age, they still whine and complain!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

elvira
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since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

3 posted 1999-08-09 02:57 PM

what's wrong with liver then?...i love that stuff, smothered in onions, yummy...his poem made me hungry

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I will live my life as i, will undoubtedly die - alone. ~Morrissey~

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