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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-08-08 01:02 AM


Spoken softly, the cessation of reality occurs.
Brought on by unimaginable stress,
-breaking point,
-resounding snap.
Echoes of laughter ring vibrantly through the clear night,
a sentiment-
repeated by millions,
braved only by a few.
A road to insanity,
paved with gales of breathless wonder.
Imagination.
Prone to incalculable excess-
always, more and more.
A focal point for immoral scrutiny,
it is abused,
wasted in a half-hearted manner.
Those who do not dream,
steal a prize not theirs...
Then discard it like an old lover,
never to discover the
-amazement
that could be.
Purpose denied, dementia sinks
into a fathomless void
-alone.


(I'm sorry most of my poetry seems so dark and depressing, but so you know, it's just the balance to my disgustingly sick sense of optomistic buoyancy!)

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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars.
-Unknown-
So let the sun beat down upon my face,
It's warmth will dry my tears.

© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-08-14 11:20 PM


Okay, that's it...I must get inside your head, sir. I am making you an appointment with me on Monday!! The poet therapist....IS IN....
************ Can I ask how old you are ? (curious)

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


pen of passion
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2 posted 1999-08-14 11:49 PM


Christopher, Christopher, I am in awe.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-08-15 12:02 PM


Wonderful poem sir! (maelstom of madness - hmmm...have I heard that before )


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 1999-08-15 01:43 AM


hmm, ms deVine, I wonder wher you could have heard it...

thank choo berry mucho Pen!

PFF, are you sure you want to (get in my head?) I can't guarentee your safety, nor even your sanity! (how old do you want me to be... )



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...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice.
-Billy Joel

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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5 posted 1999-08-15 02:01 AM


Ohhhh....(grinning) You & I should bump into eachother somewhere and discuss AGE....in private....! I can't decide how old I want you to be - am I in the mood to learn, or seduce? Hhhmmm...decisions, decisions...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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6 posted 1999-10-21 02:56 AM


Hmmmm - methinks Michael might like to read this....
Hahah pFF - he's mine!

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
7 posted 1999-10-21 03:00 AM


Honestly, Chris, one of the best poems I've read in a while...Thats quite a compliment in this forum!

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-04-17 01:35 PM


I like dark and depressing
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