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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-08-06 04:21 AM


The test of time shall only prove our love.
Distance will draw our hearts together.
The long silence is what I'm afraid of.
This love sets us free, it doesn't tether

Have I told you lately that I love you?
Sometimes it blinds me to my heart's demands.
You must know that I will always be true.
With each beat of your heart, my own expands.

I see no reason for you to love me.
I can't fathom why you would even care.
I know that you love me, this I can see.
Just because true love, you know, is so rare.

I want you to know that this is no ploy.
Your company truly brings me great joy.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-06-99).]

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~one voice~
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1 posted 1999-08-06 04:23 AM


I'm speechless...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
2 posted 1999-08-06 09:16 AM


DE: Wonderful poem... and wonderful when another's company can bring so much joy!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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3 posted 1999-08-06 09:23 AM


Beautiful, heartfelt and sincere words Dream...very nice. Like this side of you!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

leelew
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since 1999-07-10
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highmount,ny,usa
4 posted 1999-08-06 10:29 AM


I loved this one! Nicely done!!

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"There are none so blind as those who see only with the mind and not the heart"

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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Florida
5 posted 1999-08-06 12:23 PM


A lucky Lady you have DE!
thursdayschild
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since 1999-07-01
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Houston, Tx.
6 posted 1999-08-07 03:48 AM


Beautifully expressed, wonderful work...

Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
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Arizona
7 posted 1999-08-07 04:10 AM


To have you is to love you - and she is a very special woman to have your unique passion!
tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
8 posted 1999-08-07 09:57 AM


There Is "much love" out here for you DE..
As you express, you recieve..
Wonderfuly writen from the heart ...
One very lucky girl she is.

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
9 posted 1999-08-07 09:27 PM


So very heartfelt....beautiful, Dream.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
10 posted 1999-08-07 11:32 PM


WOW!!!! I knew it wouldn't be the last.
Absolutely wonderful! From the heart is a beautiful thing! (Because your worthy)

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
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Vinton,Ohio USA
11 posted 1999-08-08 12:21 PM


DE... your great.. need I say more? ehehe

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£


DreamEvil
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12 posted 1999-08-08 04:53 AM


My next post will be a return to the Night I love so.
thursdayschild
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Houston, Tx.
13 posted 1999-12-14 12:35 PM


Just thought I'd say it again...WONDERFUL!
  
Truly enjoy this one.

passing shadows
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displaced
14 posted 2004-04-17 01:34 PM


sweeeet write
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