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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
That's so sad  It's hardest to find the courage to do the things we know are the worst for us. Nice rythm Elvira ------------------ Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll be among the stars. -Unknown- So let the sun beat down upon my face, It's warmth will dry my tears. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
elvira, so sorry you are in pain. such a difficult situation you have written about. I know somebody going through this same thing. she decided it was best to let go also. there are some wonderful SINGLE men out there. keep the faith! |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I felt your pain. I liked this poem..though sad. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's so easy to know what needs to be done... so hard to do the deed. Your poem speaks that agony very well!! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
elvira This was very poignant - and good. As to why a woman wants a married man That is very easy to understand. We maried men have been trained, A single man is unrestrained. We married men know how to please, We've learned by falling to our knees. We don't argue, we don't fight. And we always let you sleep at night. well... I apologize for that - it just slipped out - I do not think your situation is enviable. Been there - living with that. Never again. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
You know Elvira, On the other side of the coin, it's extremely hard when there are reasons (I know it's not right), but if you're happy, then let it be, if it makes you miserable, then end it...pretty simple, but not really!!! |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Beautifully written,so true. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written Elvira, although such a sad situation. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
That is a sad poem Elvira. I don't know what is sadder, the words you use, or the fact that you bite your tongue and don't say them. A nice poem all the same, and a powerful one. PW |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Elvira Hang in there sweetheart..if it helps, think: que será será..:-) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
You write so well and you have a new friend. You know what they say, smile and the world smiles with you. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Terri Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 82Turtle Creek, PA |
Isn't it amazing how such a deep and strong passion can make you feel so fragile? Not wanting to settle for less and yet unable to let go. May you find the happiness you desire. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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