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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-08-05 02:00 AM

Its been way to long my love
I wonder, will we ever see each again
At night I watch the stars above
And think about you special friend
I wonder what you are doing How you’re feeling
If you still love me
My senses reeling
but , I know
I’ll always be with you
You have set into my heart
And there you’ll be forever
And although we are apart
I’ll forget you – never

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 1999-08-24 09:27 AM

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Colin
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since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

2 posted 1999-08-24 11:56 AM

I know the feeling well, and I sympathize.

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-08-24 10:05 PM

Nicely done with a bittersweet feel..beautifully written. Great work!!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-08-25 03:07 AM

Eric and Alwye .. thank you for your lovely comments

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

5 posted 1999-08-26 02:27 PM

my boyfreind is off in the army and your poems are really holding me up. I want to share a quote that my boyfriend and i love so much. "If love was a dove, set it free, if it comes back it was meant to be. If it doesn't, then it was never yours to begin with." I don't know the author.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 1999-08-26 04:56 PM

Thank you Miriam,I am flattered to know that my poems are holding you up :-) Yes.. the quote I have heard of it and used it before, it certainly rings true, doesn't it?
Thanks again :-)

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

7 posted 1999-08-26 05:01 PM

Dark Angel

Nice variance on the lines, and the message was crafted very well. I enjoyed it.

Miriam - that quote goes at least back to the 60's, and probably a lot farther than that. A variance is,
"If love was a dove, set it free. If it comes back it was meant to be. If it doesn't, then hunt it down and kill it."

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 1999-08-29 04:35 PM

thanks LngJhnAg, for your comment. ( hehehe hunt it down and kill it)Kewl!

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