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My First Lover
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My First Lover |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Passing by your house the other day If I saw you, what would I say? My heart was beating, oh so strong You, only you, can tell me if I was wrong. Giving you my all felt so right It truly was a memorable night. Why don't you call, have you no feeling That time together still has me wheeling. To waken every morning and think of you - Was this your way what two bodies could do? Or perhaps your chance to become satisfied My insides felt maybe you were unsatisfied. Wanting to know will help me understand If I was a poor lover or if I was grand. Oh, well, no answer will ne'er you tell Sever the idea if I said go to Hell. Was your attraction to me a mutual thing? If so, thank you for making my heart bring Thumping and pumping like never before There will always be for you an open door! Too serious, I apologize for writing this, Had to tell you that I received great bliss. Remembering this time until the day I die, So my wonderful lover I will say goodbye! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Cinderella, if your sincerity in love-making matches your sincerity in this poem I have no doubt the lucky fella was satisfied. Words well written. |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Balla"deer" so nice was your comment!  |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I know there was a couple lines in there that I'd have LOVED to say....yep. Well done, Cinderella. |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Thanks Sally ! |
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