Open Poetry #1 |
Emotion |
Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I am happy, Happy to hear a voice, A voice I heard not long ago. But I am happy, nonetheless, To hear it again. I am happy, Happy to see a face, A face I saw not long ago. But I am happy, nonetheless, To see it again. I am sad, Sad because that face, That voice, Are so far from me, So very far. I yearn to hear that voice, To see that face Again. Just once more Until never enough Is still not complete. Just once more... ------------------ Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true? |
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Darquewing Junior Member
since 1999-07-30
Posts 20 |
It truely does tell a good story... I know this one by heart.. Excellent work.. ------------------ KEEP THE DARQUENESS ALIVE! Darquewing |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sweet and Simple, MI - nice job, indeed... |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
a lovely, yearning poem ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim ...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving... Master...chat?...apart...plain...hush...then...vice...shameless self promotion |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The simplest emotions are the strongest. This poem is simple......and strong. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 08-05-99).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
That really was a nice piece of work,,,(especially from a wrestler) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Here I am making fun of your name.....and mine's Toerag?.... |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Wrestler?! LMAO! Shyeah right...try football player, you appendage wiper! *Grins* ------------------ Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true? |
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