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poohbear
Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 42
piedmont,sc

0 posted 1999-08-04 12:15 PM



As the ink of the pen forms dots on the page
and the letters form into words
my passions rage
from my mind and my heart down to my hand
my words become phrases you may understand
like magic creating what wasnt before
starting with a few words and adding some more
building an image for all to see
reflecting so delicatly the true side of me
exposing to you my inner self
like a fine piece of china placed on a shelf
so read with care and understand
these words are a part
of who I am

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alan f. shulver

© Copyright 1999 poohbear - All Rights Reserved
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-08-04 01:13 AM


i guess we all seek to connect with our fellow human beings on some level, and most of us here have chosen poetry to accomplish that goal


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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...Music to my Ears...hoarse whispers...just watching tv...Feel the need?...serving wench...Tribute to M.J....take a guess...sink or swim
...stolen hours...the mistress...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...07-20-69...craving...
Master...chat?...apart...plain...vice...shameless self promotion


angel girl
Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
2 posted 1999-08-04 03:51 AM


very good. well written.


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