Open Poetry #1 |
where is it? |
redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
I would cross the ocean swim the longest river known climb the highest mountain to get there I would crawl down on my knees if only one day I could reach the place I know exists in my mind I know it's there, I've seen it I know it's there, I feel it if somehow I could reach it but maybe I'm too scared I don't wanna live without it and there's no doubt about it I'll find it where I least expect it and I won't be alone when I reach home ------------------ Kay-lynn |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I like it! You have a way with words. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the message behind this poem! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
wow.. thanks.. encouraging words from a writer...thanks.. |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
Wow...I really, really like this. I hope you aren't alone when you get home. |
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