Open Poetry #1 |
Wings of the Angels |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
A gentle wind blew cross the land Reaching out to take a hand For on the winds the angels came Calling out a mother's name. Left behind, the children's tears Loving memories of the years Of joy and love, a life well spent And now to God, a mother's sent. With saddened heart, a child's farewell Regrets of love, forgot to tell Mother's whispers from above "Twas not words, that showed your love." As flesh departs, deep sorrow's pain But mother's love shall e'er remain Inside each child a mother lives For of herself, a mother gives. On angel's wings, a heavenly flight The journey home, towards the light To those who weep, a life is gone But in God's love, 'tis but the dawn. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely beautiful. Nothing else need be said. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Thank you Balladeer |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This poem says what I've been feeling this week much better than I could... Thanks |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply lovely! There is so much feeling in this poem, it's amazing! |
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Raven Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 67Hopewell Jct, New York, USA |
Wistfully beautiful, I think every child who loses their mother should read this. Do you mind if I print this poem out and show it to some of the children at my mother's work? I think it would give them a great deal of comfort. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Raven, I am honored you would want to share my poetry with others. Tim |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
I like the blend of earthly sorrow with the hope of an afterlife. This poem gave me chills. Keep up the work! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tim, Thank you for speaking of angels, a favorite love of my own...I hope what I post as a new member will be of insight to you as well. I lost my mother and father, although I am "of age", but the missing never stops. Thank you for your words. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
This is so touching... very beautiful indeed... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Before the morn, in still of night, A heav'nly choir, sings sweet refrain, Out of darkness, springs forth the light, A mother's love shall e'er remain. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 07-16-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully touching!! |
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