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taken for granted..................never known
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taken for granted..................never known |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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through enviuos eyes, i see you, being touched the way i want, being held the way i want , so inside i learn to hate, every smile that crosses your face. your beautiful hands, so soft like silk, looking at my own, worn from time, by all the pain, we will never share in common. your eyes still affixed, with that soft glow, that burning tears, have forced from my own, everytime my heart was broken. i see the love you have, and it touches my soul, because perhaps, its something surreal, that i have never known. i watch the security he provides for you, and i cant even feel safe within myself, and i long for that one moment, when i can finally feel, everything you take for granted. |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Perfect!I LOVE THIS POEM!it is wonderful!!!And soooooooooo true ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
thanx for your comment, its always nice to know that other people feel the way i do at times. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"and i long for that one moment, when i can finally feel, everything you take for granted." an exceptional three lines here!! What a perfect ending to a wonderful poem. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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