to regret.............UNIMAGINABLE.

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to regret.............UNIMAGINABLE.

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-08-02 06:14 PM

dont touch me,
that softly,
it burns through my skin,
like a fire,
untamable.

dont kiss me,
that sweetly,
it moves my soul,
thick flowing like a river,
into your arms,
unscapable.

dont promise me,
it silently whispers,
youll be here forever,
in my embrace,
enchanting me,
with everything left unsiad,
a moment,
irreplacable.

dont dream of me,
eventually dreams fade,
like long gone i love yous,
across my skin,
with such a steady glance,
as you turned to walk away,
that pain,
unforgettable.

dont leave me,
my soul drians in your goodbyes,
my body aches without your touch,
kissing my eyes softly you assure,
ill see you agian soon,
living without you,
impossible.

dont let me love you this much,
it makes me vulnerable,
to every move you make,
everything you say,
in my eyes a forever built,
soley with you,
and you share my convictions,
of loving blindly agian,
of putting fear aside this time,
to truly fall in love,
to ever regret this,
unimaginable.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-08-02 06:17 PM

WOw.....this is a very stronbgly emotional poem. It is hard to not use those self proctection mechanisims when we have been hurt before and know we can be hurt again. But love, like life itself is a chance we have to take.

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

2 posted 1999-08-02 06:31 PM

thank you for your comment, and how right you are, this is a chance im willing to take. after all what is a life without risks, especially when the consequences can be love.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 1999-08-02 07:28 PM

Excellent! Something that I'm sure we can all relate to at one time or another in our life. Thanks for sharing.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-08-02 07:47 PM

Amber, you have such a beautiful way with words, but I would like to see you spell check a little more...please don't take this wrong! I loved the poem! You honestly have a good imagery going here! I look forward to more......

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

5 posted 1999-08-03 09:05 PM

thank you so much, for your encouragement, it is really needed, and for the tip, thanx!

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