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Open Poetry #1

Scream

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-08-02 08:22 PM

I was sitting at home one day,
watching Kirsten pretend, and play.

The dog was growling, 'cause he's mean,
Rugrats was on the T.V. screen.

When out of nowhere came a scream,
and through the window came a beam.

So I looked out the door, and what did I see?
Aliens were calling out to me.

They said, "come with us, come join the fun,
we are having a party for everyone!"

So I looked at the ship, bright as can be,
and decided ok come and get me.

Up I went into the beam of light,
preparing to take off on this marvelous flight.

But half way up the ship broke down,
it crashed and burned most of the town.

I thanked God when I saw everyone,
on the ship, they were having fun.

Then I woke up, it was just a dream,
when all the sudden I heard a scream...

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

1 posted 1999-08-03 10:29 AM

Crystal I really liked this.It was cute.

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

2 posted 1999-08-03 10:36 AM

I like it, I do poems a lot like yours. I sometimes do ones with dreams or other things like E.T.'s and stuff. Keep up the good work!

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

3 posted 1999-08-03 09:01 PM

Nevermind...

[This message has been edited by Delores Hall (edited 08-03-99).]

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-08-03 09:04 PM

Thank-you Delores and Sundance. This was the first time I wrote a poem like this. I was just sitting there doodling on paper.

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