Open Poetry #1 |
Love is What Hurt |
deannamarie Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43WI |
My tears are crimson blood for I've been torn by pain My mind's a throbbing pulse it makes me go insane I'd have much more willingly been speared by a knife What did I do to have to pay such a price? I just needed someone who I thought cared I just needed someone who would be there All I did was trust, love, and hope I guess I was wrong I guess I was blind I should've known all along They say you'll get over it but they never learn They say that love will heal me but love is what hurt |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well spoken-something we've all been through and it hurts like heck. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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poohbear Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 42piedmont,sc |
a man one day flew toward the sun and as he got closer things got hotter and hotter but his passions led him and he continued on his journy getting ever closer to his desire he eventaly got burnt but he had chased his passion and was happy in knowing that he had conquered what he had set out to get done. his trip was a lot like yours, you chased after your passion but got burnt. it was betterĀ for the man to chase his dream and get burnt then to havenever taken the journey. sorry to hear you got hurt...but atleast you took the trip, keep chasing your passions and your writings... |
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