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Open Poetry #1

firefly to starfish

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-08-01 11:47 PM

It so amazes me
how that little light
i give off
touched you so deeply
and now you shine
more brightly than
the brighest creature
in the sea

but remember this
it's my only wish
as time goes by..

it's my pleasure
to watch you fly
i'll just float here
and say
hi hi hi

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

1 posted 1999-08-02 12:07 PM

nice piece.. Something about it reminds me of cummings though.. Keep on writing..

Love,
Lady

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redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

2 posted 1999-08-02 07:18 AM

Cummings?... really? I'll have to go look up some stuff by him.(err it is a "him" right?) Thanks for the comment.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-08-02 08:37 AM

Cute!

graham
Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 60
South Yorkshire, England

4 posted 1999-08-05 10:34 AM

Cute and funny!
You're in touch with a sensitivity that few can express.

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