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CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28
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0 posted 1999-08-01 11:00 PM


This life took me so deep
Deep down into sorrow
I just sit and weep
Will I see tomorrow

This life broght me down low
How do I continue to live
With nowhere left to go
And nothing left to give

I don't know wrong from right
The pain has made me tough
Always prepared to fight
My disposition is so rough

I can't take the silence
Such maddness never seen
Should I turn to violence
The cruelty oh so keen

It's all becoming clear
My heart i can revive
There's nothing left to fear
I know I must survive


[This message has been edited by CSwtThng (edited 08-01-99).]

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-08-02 02:00 AM


Ah, a poem that describes me so well it is almost eerie. I truly felt this, CSwtThng. Excellent piece of work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-08-02 08:29 AM


This is well done! We always have ourselves to give to another in need. A kind deed to another helps us to feel good!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-08-02 08:39 AM


Sometimes we have no choice but to survive....everything in time will pass and life goes on, with or without us.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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