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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
This life took me so deep Deep down into sorrow I just sit and weep Will I see tomorrow This life broght me down low How do I continue to live With nowhere left to go And nothing left to give I don't know wrong from right The pain has made me tough Always prepared to fight My disposition is so rough I can't take the silence Such maddness never seen Should I turn to violence The cruelty oh so keen It's all becoming clear My heart i can revive There's nothing left to fear I know I must survive [This message has been edited by CSwtThng (edited 08-01-99).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, a poem that describes me so well it is almost eerie. I truly felt this, CSwtThng. Excellent piece of work!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is well done! We always have ourselves to give to another in need. A kind deed to another helps us to feel good! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes we have no choice but to survive....everything in time will pass and life goes on, with or without us. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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