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real agian, lost agian..

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-08-02 02:05 AM

here you are,
your touch so real,
and im lost agian,
in what i feel,
that i never want to lose you.

her i am,
tears washed away,
forgotten the pain,
of our yesterdays,
to find a future with you.

making me laugh,
my happiness is real,
losing my resistance,
its now surreal,
because i know you make me happy.

kissing me softly,
no doubt in my mind,
that once agian,
im lost this time,
becuase i cant push you away.

laying next to you,
i feel safe agian,
in your arms,
salvation begins,
becuase i trust you now.

putting my faith in you,
to know that im enough,
hasnt been as hard for me,
as i thought it was,
becuase i understand your intentions.

its real agian,
and i need you,
im lost agian,
but what can i do,
im falling in love agian.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-08-02 08:05 AM

The feelings of love...Well done! If I may give a word of wisdom. No man is our salvation and hold no man as your god. That seems to be our biggest downfall.
I like your poem!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-02 08:34 AM

This is a nice poem, but you really need to watch the little mistakes, do a spell check before posting if at all possible, little things like that really distract from your work

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