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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
You stay in your own space, there is an invisible wall. I dare not sep in it's place, won't you let it fall? The wall around you is forbiding, it scares me to try. I know your not kidding, But I ask, why? Is it love you want, or is it friendship? Why are you so blunt, do you toss and turn like a ship? I would love to help you, but is it love you want and need? It makes me cry, Oh you!, do you ever want to be freed? I hope you find a mate, I say this like a friend. Don't stay in a never-ending plate, is there awound that I can mend? If the wound is great, why don't you let it heal? Oh, is it to late? I hope not, as I kneel! Your life is a box, you dare not go out. It is over you like a pox, are you in a state of doubt? I wish I could help, but when you come around that bend, I'll help, just give yelp! I will help you mend!!! |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
I cannot get over how much the person you describe here sounds like Jan!!! Exactly!!! Sighhhhh. This brings back sad memories. Great poetry triumph for you, Aly  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes people have to want to be freed. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
Thanks for the input, and it is about jan, well Jan inspired me to do this piece! |
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