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I am He |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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I am He I am He The twice born Son Unconceived As yet undone In my hand I hold a gun Against Blind Justice The Tainted One There is no ransom She shan't go free Forever will she be Next to me I feel the trigger I see the blow Recoil in anger She bleeds not slow I heal the wound With soothing speech So I can kill her Again next week Every time I feel the itch A thousand times, I'll kill the Bitch As yet undone Unconceived The twice born Son I am He So it is written So shall it be So it is spoken So mote it be Alicat ------------------ Le Jongleur Aspirante [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 07-31-99).] |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i absolutely adore the word "shan't"...interesting poem, the heavenly avenger?  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...07-20-69... insomnia...devotion...craving (adult)...Master...apart...plain...chat? ... shameless self-promotion |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Are you mad at someone?This is weird. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Perhaps you should explain this one to us a bit. I think I have an idea what it's all about..but, I don't want to misinterpret. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
elvira: Thanks! shan't and sharn'tDolores: Nope, not angry at anyone. Just that I have many different poetic sides, from the satanic to angelic, free and constructed, love and hate. I think you catch the drift. After 10 years of writing poetry, I think I would shoot myself if I was still writing in the same style.Sally: When this was wrote, I believe I was listening to Iron Maiden's "Seventh Son of a Seventh Son". It's basically about revolution and the angst-ridden hatred of 'Justice' in this present context. And, no, I'm not advocating overthrow of the government..at least not at the moment..it's just something that wrote itself. Also, the last 4 lines are a conclusive ending, prophetic in nature. i.e. 'As it is written, so shall it be' kinda thing. Alicat |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Beautifully written.. Once again I was in your mind with this one.. Tell you late about that.. Change of style for you.. Great job.. I hope that you do this again soon.. Love, Lady "Sometimes at night the wolves are silent and only the moon howls." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
now this is interesting... would love if you come back for a re-cap of this, all things considering... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am with Karen on this. Outstanding. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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