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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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it whispers, turns and follows it shutters, calls and swallows it binds, it grieves with ever-need it twists and dances and bleeds |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Your poem has some wonderful phrases and I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Janus New Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7 |
What a musical poem! I often think that truly good poetry is much like music, with rhythm and power, and eloquence. |
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fjones Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 98MS |
Great poem! I like short and to the heart |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Thanks for the welcome. Poetry is the language I wish we could all communicate in. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Chris - I stuck this up again because this was my first post - needless to say it is completely irrelevant now! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Ahhhh ,, see in the beginning you were a rhymer---lovely one too... "Or, like the thief of fire from heaven, |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Jamie I rhymed..hmm...cause it sounded nice haha...I wrote this on a scrap of paper at a bus stop... I threw it up on passions as my first post solely because when I found this place I was at someone else's house and could remember this off the top of my head... never a rhymer by heart...wow, I can't believe how long ago this was... hugs dear  KAll obscurity starts with a danger: |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
heheheh you a rhymer as well now I didnt know that hmmmmm nice, hon very nice.  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I AM NOT A RHYMER! I PROTEST! This was a once off ~sulk~ Heh...love you two... K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Hi-- my name is Kamla-- and I once wrote in Rhyme--- but it seems I lost the ability and can no longer do it....heh love ya hon There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I lost the ability when I read all the rhyme YOU two produced...hmm... HAH HAHAHAHAH love you too dear... ROTF yes I know that was a cheap shot and means I can't come up with anything better - don't tell anyone  K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As long as we have already abused this thread... err-- you can't see it.. but it didnt work...heh There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron [This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What on earth was the point of THAT???? |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Yes..it certainly does! enjoyed! I am many. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
An anniversary bump for this your introductory poem to passions. If not for this, your first, we would never have been graced with the wonderful words to come. We may not come here as much as before, nor even have the need for it we once shared, there are memories, both bad and good to be found here. God (and Ron) willing we can always visit- if even for a little while. Love ya heaps lil' tigger k and always HK>LK J |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
wonderfully said. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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