Open Poetry #1 |
Memory |
Nectar Junior Member
since 1999-06-09
Posts 18Pensacola, Florida |
Memories fall like rain Splashing through the puddles I am joyously searching For anything that reminds me of you Your eyes: azure perfection Your smile: unveiled beauty Your voice: angel’s laughter My feet become prunes Yet long ago did I realize Looking for anything I found that everything Reminds me of you |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent!! Need I say more? |
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Cobra Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58 |
Great metaphors Nectar! Real nice. ^_^ ------------------ Cammie |
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