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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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Yes, I have a passion... To be held in your arms... To snuggle in your warm embrace... Feeling safe from harm. I would love to walk with you... After the sun goes down... Down to a sandy beach... And spread a blanket on the ground. There we would become entwined... Two hearts would beat as one... A soft sweet kiss..a playful shove... And then we'd start to run. I would let you catch me... We are laughing with such bliss... Yes..this is a fantansy... In my mind I picture this. I can feel your tender touch... Your warm breath on my cheek... While standing close in your arms... My knees become so weak. You tell me that you love me... I say.."I love you too"... Then overcome with passion... We both know what to do. At this special time... We let our emotions flow... My fantansy becomes reality... I don't want to let it go. But once more I return... from the world that I was in... Tonight after the sun goes down... Fantansy takes me to the beach again. ------------------ Kitty** |
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Cobra Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58 |
Kitty... This poem was lovely! Why hasn't anyone else commented? Come on people, it's beautiful! Don't worry sweetie, you never know if your fantasy will become a reality. I really enjoyed your poem!  ------------------ Cammie |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kitty, I read your fantasy, About your fling out on the beach. And how you'd love to romp along, Just out of his reach. When finally succumbing to his arms, You give a moaning sigh, Then, just as he moved in, You'd awake and say, "Good bye." You are a little devil, Kitty, I could read in every line, How you'd drive a man to distraction, Then act like it was fine. I must prepare my defenses, For all know what Kitty**s do. They toy with helpless micies, Before turning them into food. Kitty** I liked your poem. It flowed well, and left me hanging until the end. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
CAMMI..It's responses like this that really bolsters my courage to post my "stuff"..LOL.. Thank you sincerely, and I do know that sometimes fantasies do come true. ------------------ Kitty** |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
HEYYYYYY..LngJhnAg...that's NOT fair.. Your poem was better then mine, but in all honesty, everybody knows about a cat! Purr, purr, ;-) Ooops..left off my 'S'..(G) [This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 07-30-99).] |
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