Open Poetry #1 |
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Someone i wish to be |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
He can turn my frowns into great big smiles. He can make my heart do flips. He is everything that I want in a man. But he has someone! He is my sunshine when I'm sad. He is my laughter when I'm mad. He has the smile that makes me swoon. He has the eyes that gleam like the moon. But he has someone! He tells me I'm pretty. He tells me I'm fun. He tells me how great I am what a great person I am. But he has someone! He makes me think that I deserve the world. He makes me believe I can have the moon & stars. He makes me think that that someone should be me! He makes me wonder what life would be like together. *******Augchic711******* He makes me want to be with him. He made me respect him for all that he's done. He made me love him for the kindness he showed. But he has someone! He made me realize how alike we are inside. He made me want to enjoy every minute. He made me want him to share it and be in it. But he has someone! He is everything to me. He is everything that I want. He is the perfect gentleman. He is kind to me. He is funny to cheer me up. He treats me like a queen. But he has someone! He makes me want to be that someone. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
wow.. sounds like a great guy.. and sounds like your love sick.. hehe.. ![]() ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
I am pretty love sick gentle soul you can read it in almost every poem i write thanx for reading mine ![]() ------------------ *******Augchic711******* |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Accept his friendship now and see Someday "someone" may turn out to be The very one he's speaking to Dear Augchic, someday it might be you! ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is a poem to be proud of aug hope you find love soon that you can share with someone alone nice poem yes |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Very nice poem Augchic. Just a little word of advice. If he knows he is doing this for you while he has someone then he probably isn't that great of a guy. If he is doing that then he is playing both you and that "someone". And if he is doing that do you really want to someday be that "someone"? Just some food for thought. Jfreak |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
thank you all for your kind words and jfreak you always give me food for thought keep it coming but to answer your question he has no idea that he does this for me he is my best-friend! but good luck to you all in life, love, and writing! ![]() *******Augchic711******* |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful Augchic711. I can truly relate to this. I have been in the same sort of situation, but now he and I are going out. Wonderful job! ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I have to agree with jfreak....this guy sounds like he's playing off both you and his 'someone'...he shouldn't be making you feel like this if he's committed to someone else. What if you do get together someday and then you're his someone..will we see a poem posted by the next girl he flirts with? A word of caution............... |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Thank you all for your words and poet for you words of wisdom I very much understand what you are saying. Thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poems. *******Augchic711******* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your sincerity always shows through, Augchic...an admirable trait. But, believe me, it's easy making someone "on the side" feel that way. The idea is to make your main someone feel that way! |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Thanks for the compliment Balladeer and I do agree with you it's easy for some to say not to let him get to me but everyone always says that you fall in love with your friends and I truly believe that friendship is stronger in the long run. So thanx everyone for your opinions. *******Augchic711******* |
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