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georgie
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since 1999-06-18

Posts 2
long island

0 posted 1999-06-18 07:41 PM

You flew through life,
in a wink of an eye,
You fought a good fight,
gave life a valiant try.
But like a rose in bloom,
in the cold deep snow,
Too fragile and beautiful,
to prosper and grow.
So sleep sweetly my little one,
the battle is now done,
You will live on in my heart,
my Timothy, my beloved son.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-06-18 08:38 PM

Extremely touching and moving.. Thank you.

georgie
New Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 2
long island

2 posted 1999-06-18 09:27 PM

beautiful work..you must have lost a child
what a wonderful tribute to him thanks

Wintersurfer
Junior Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 16

3 posted 1999-06-18 09:35 PM

You have expressed your love for your son so simply and beautifully. Thank you.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-06-18 09:53 PM

Welcome to Passions, Georgie
This poem has a great deal of personal significance to me today - Thanks for posting it... It's lovely

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

5 posted 1999-06-18 10:06 PM

A very moving sentiment. Thank you for sharing this with us.

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

6 posted 1999-06-18 10:29 PM

beautiful poem... I am so sorry for your loss.

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

7 posted 1999-06-19 09:43 PM

beautiful...

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 1999-06-19 11:40 PM

Poetry that makes us feel...makes us cry or laugh is the purest poetry. This poem was pure...we feel the loss as you do. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Augchic711
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

9 posted 1999-06-20 03:01 AM

One word for you OUTSTANDING!!!! Thank you for sharing your loss with us. I am sooo sorry but I feel your pain as well as everyone who will read your poetry! Thank you for sharing it with me and what a wonderful tribute to your son Timothy!

******Augchic711*******

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2004-07-04 11:17 PM

Beautiful, very much enjoyed

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