Open Poetry #1 |
NEVER GONE by Sheila Thurston |
Sheila Junior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 23Lansing, Michigan, Ingham |
You closed your eyes and slipped away Upon the breath of God I know it's peaceful where you are But life will now seem odd I see you there in flowing gowns With Grandma by your side You travel in and out of view Just like the ocean tide Dear Lord, don't ever let me loose The image of your face The mother that gave birth to me And helped me find my place You nurtured me and helped me grow With love and tenderness I'll always feel you close to me My mothers sweet caress You'll never be completely gone And in the mirror I'll see The beautiful reflection Of you staring back at me The special bond that we have shared Is something that will stay Our life eternal partnership Death cannot take away You'll live forever in my heart As precious as can be My time with you upon this earth Too short now, I can see We said the things we needed to Before you went away I know you love me very much There are no regrets today So now you go to be with Him Our Lord has called you home To be forever in His love You'll never be alone Someday I will be there with you With Grandma and the rest Together through eternity In paradise so blessed Sheila Thurston April 23, 1999 ------------------ |
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JANNA Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 51arlington, tx usa |
what a beautiful poem I couldn't imagine such a great loss but you expressed it profoundly. |
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Sheila Junior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 23Lansing, Michigan, Ingham |
Janna, thank you so much...I just found this site tonight...yours was the first comment, on my first poem...thank you, it means alot to have someone read my work! |
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JANNA Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 51arlington, tx usa |
I just found this site too, it sure is great to be able to put out your work for others to read, and to read and be inspired by what others write. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Sheila, This is outstanding! You are a welcome addition. fh |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sheila - Your work is very good - Believe me, you'll have lots of readers.. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I read most of your poem then had to stop to wipe the tears from my eyes. Truly beautiful! Welcome to the group, you'll love it here. Whoever said poetry was a dying art sure hasn't been here! Please post often, I look forward to reading your other work. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful |
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