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THE BIG DUMB WHITE GUY
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 9
BROWNSVILLE, TEXAS,UNITED STATES

0 posted 1999-07-29 07:17 PM


INTIMACY

SHE MOTIONS FOR ME,
TO COME TO HER,
TO LYE ON HER,
TO LAY MY HEAD ON HER LAP.
SHE RUNS HER HANDS TROUGH MY HAIR,,
SHE CARESSES MY FACE,
SHE RUNS HER HANDS OVER MY EYES
AND ASKS FOR ME TO CLOSE THEM,
I DO AS SHE SAYS.
AND WITH NO WORDS TRANSGRESS BETWEEN US,
WE TALKED.
WE TALKED TROUGH OUR ACTIONS,
WITH EVERY STROKE OF MY HAIR,,
EVERY LOOK INTO HER EYES,
EVERY SIGH,
EVERY BREATH OF AIR,,
I COULD FEEL WHAT SHE WAS TRYING TO SAY,
BUT YOU SEE OUR LOVE IS SO STRONG,
AND I KNOW HER SO WELL,
AND SHE KNOWS ME,
SO PERFECTLY,
THAT NO WORDS HAVE TO BE SAID
IN A MOMENT OF INTIMACY

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-08-30 10:28 AM


Aaahh man, you're not so dumb....you know what love is....that's more than I can say for some!! Kinda hurts my eyes to read this in CAPS though...I'm squinting, cause you're yellin'.........he he

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-08-30 11:30 AM


lovely,caring..thank you for sharing

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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