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Terry Cuthbert.
Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 11
Oxford UK

0 posted 1999-08-30 05:10 AM


I saw the man falling,

He had a smile on his face;

As if, for the very first time in his life,

He was free.

© Copyright 1999 Terry Cuthbert. - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
1 posted 1999-08-30 05:53 AM


Very interesting verse... I like it!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-08-30 11:40 AM


There is strawberry
and rasberry and all
kinds of berries
But of them all
I like terry.
Have a good one.

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-08-30 11:49 AM


I agree with ~one voice~; and Sy, you are too cute!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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