Open Poetry #1 |
I Don't Understand |
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I don't understand why the dark side you choose, It may be fun now, but there all gonna lose. I just don't understand the choice that you make When all evil is good for is take, take, take, take. There's no truth in evil for it has all died So why would you choose to fill your heart with such pride? I just don't understand to choose bad over good For there's much with God that I have withstood. Sometimes I feel as I've let evil take stride But I know that there's goodness in this soul inside. Were here for a reason to make a great choice So why would you choose the Evil one's voice? Why go to the dark side when they will not win They'll all burn with Satan, that master of sin. Somebody help me understand why this you'd choose When there's so much to life, and your soul you could lose? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
What an enlightening piece... they choose because they do not know there's a better choice - or they're too stubborn to follow faith...Good work! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
They choose evil because they know they're not worthy of good....it's the easy way out. It's a poem that inspires thought. Good job. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you for the replies. I guess you're right, it is the easy way out. I guess I will truly never understand this though. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thought I would bring this up top, to see what more people think. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
i think some people do evil because they were never taught the goodness of good and god. some people also choose evil, i think, because they are selfish and don't care if they hurt other people. ------------------ The world is in your hands; it is what you make of it. keep on chuggin' |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I found it. So here it is... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you, dear Lady. I will write verse to explain this to you. Balladeer, revered Elder, you are not entirely correct. While it is easier to live in Darkness, being worthy of the Light is not the issue. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I have to state, staying in Darkness is the easy way out, and none of us are worthy of the Light! We all fall short! Sometimes people think to go in the light they would have to give up to much. But no one could be freer than in the Light! |
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