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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
Let me out to play Don't keeped me locked away I haven't done anything wrong let the rings of fire out let me hear the song The unknown wants to be known I sit and wait to be noticed She waits for someone to come Don't ignore- Don't delay Come-Open door When is a door not a door when it is ajar Peak through the light I'm alone Look around and see nothing Open the door and let her out Boundries are gone Just open space Beyond the walls are all her lost dreams let me out Night and day with no ending I yearn to feel the light Yet she's confused The fire of eternalness is gone Only open space when forever ends Night and day never end they just cover one another Fairy tales end Unshapely figures take over in the night the darkness closes around me she's scared--Let her out Then in one split second Forever ends ------------------ Kiya Bowermaster |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
A job well done. |
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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
Thankyou WhtDove. I'm very glad you liked it. I didn't think anybody would ever reply. ------------------ Kiya Nicole |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thanks for your E-mail...I'm really flattered you chose me to ask me for my opinion on your work. I think this is a very nice piece - the content reminds me of what I spent many years writing about , all those same emotions. For me, it was a way to vent my frustrations & disappointments. Most of it wasn't even considered poetry , I have pages of simply "my thoughts." I'll E-mail you some time today, so we can talk more...I'd love to see more of your work....we try to stay short & sweet in here, so as to not "clutter" & take up precious space...I'll be keeping in touch - you just keep on writing ! ; ) ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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